Got unnexppected good reviews on my last rap as it was suppose to be more of a message than a rap. Its not closed to finished yet, still have a different singing part, another faster rap, and then another singing part to finish it.
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Fuck, sometimes I wanna quit ride on luck, and throw a fit on all the little bits of life that make life suck, I feel like shit, but maybe I should try a little harder before callin it quits.
I feel sick, quick, use these mits to to keep warm. To scared of being norm, to afraid to be surrounded by swarms of nades, a grenade would definately blow my phase of cover. I love her and now that my covers blown up I better, I better show her my stuff. "Whats up?" I ask thinking hopefully she'll respond to me, trying to send as much positive energy towards ya, you know Im movin for ya, and just at the thought of that you take a step back and let me rethink what Ive done bad.
(This part not rapped but done in my singing voice):
Im so sad
I cant take what I said back
Now my hearts on, hearts on, hearts on attack
And now Ive lost my pack
Not fiction, just fact
Theres no way im gettin em' back
Ive gotten to off track
(Back to rap):
Now my need to reach higher, lets me achieve God Speed, but comes with a liar who calls me sire and he keeps motherfuckin following me around I think im a have to drown this tool in my pool, like Eminem and Ja Rule your the fool, your Ja Rule, Im Eminem takin ya to school. You think your cool and dope, your not, nope in fact I hope the best for ya comes on rope.
So you can hang yourself while your at it, sorry to say it but theres not going to be much stuff to play with, and lets face it why dont you just go to a happier place? No more fight, Ill do it instead with a knife, hopefully it feels right, and I hope theres so much more for you in that light.
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Thats all I got so far.
Fri Jul 04, 2014 10:48 am by 
